Thursday, June 18, 2009

Updates!

First off, I'd like to thank Silverstar for her lovely True Warrior Cats Fan award!


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Thanks, Silverstar! :)

Second, I'm going to start featuring Warriors Fan Fictions here on Sorrelpaw's Blog. For those of you who don't know, Fan Fictions are basically Warriors stories written by fans.

This week I'm featuring my own Fan Fiction, Crashed. Its a short fictional story I wrote about what I think could have happened when Brightpaw was attacked by dogs. It features the Brightpaw x Cloudtail pairing and a tiny bit of Swiftpaw x Brightpaw. Note, this story is rated T for minor use of gore.

Do you have a favorite Fan Fiction? Or do you have a Fan Fiction you wrote yourself? Post it here and it may be featured on Sorrelpaw's Blog!
-Sorrelpaw

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☪Dream said...
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☪Dream said...

Death Listener


Description-

Clan-MoonClan

Leader-Wingstar-feathery gray male with blue eyes and white streaks

Deputy-Leafriver-tortoiseshell male with green eyes and black paws

Warriors-

Wolfsong-black tom with black eyes and gray streaks
Soarwing-gray tom with amber eyes and white paws
Cloudpelt-fluffy white she-cat with blue eyes and black stripes
Sparrowbranch-brown tom with amber eyes and white spots
Shrewstone-brown tom with green eyes and black/white stripes
Riverclaw-blue/gray she-cat with gray eyes and black paws
Dawnheart-river-gray she-cat with blue eyes and lighter gray stripes
Heathersky-heather brown she-cat with hearther eyes and is mate with Stonefang
Stonefang-stone gray tom with gray eyes and is mates with Heathersky
Rosepetal-cream she-cat with yellow eyes and white stripes

Apprentices-
Nightpaw-black tom with green eyes and tip of tail white
Skypaw-blue/gray she-cat with blue eyes and black stripes
Tawnypaw-tawny tom with gold eyes and brown ears
Blackpaw-brown tom with amber eyes and white stripes,black tail
Thrushpaw-beige tom with heather eyes and fur tips black

StarClan-
Reedkit(Reedpond)-gray tom with blue eyes and black tail
Mosskit(Mosscloud)-heather tom with green eyes and brown spots
Runningkit(Runningbrook)-blue/gray she-cat with gray eyes and gray spots
Featherkit(Featherwing)-feathery black she-cat with green eyes and white specks
Rainwater-blue/gray she-cat with blue eyes and darker blue/grey stripes

Died-
Littlepaw-white she-cat with gold eyes and black ears
Flowernight-tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes and black streaks
Rainash-blue/gray tom with gray eyes and black streaks
Soottail-gray/white tom with blue eyes and dark tail
Smokestorm-smoke gray tom with yellow eyes and fire ash melted to fur
Sunkit-cream she-cat with cream eyes and mother was Heathersky

Other-

Nightpack

Leader-Silver-big silver male with coal black eyes,and bright silver neck fur(mane)

Members-

Fang-brown/white male with white feet and one white stripe down the back
Cloud-white male with brown streaks through fur
Claw-black male with one paw white
Storm-pretty gray female with black blurs in fur
Blackness-pure black male,everything is black on him
Light-white female with brown paws,and tail

☪Dream said...

Here is the rest of Death Listener.The first chapter at least.

Prologue

Wolfkit's ears were ringing with pain.He did not know why.He heard something.Something that was terrifying.He woke his mother,Rainwater.

"Mommy!We have to go!Please we have to go!"

"Calm down Wolfkit.Did you have a bad dream.Don't worry.All is fine now."

"No I did not have a bad dream!Please!Something bad is going to happen!Please we have to leave the camp!"

"Shhhhh.Don't worry.Tomorrow you will be able to leave,when you become an apprentice.But right now it is dark,and you are still a kit.Be quiet,or you will wake up Reedkit,Mosskit,Runningkit,and Featherkit."

"But Mommy!We have to leave!Please!I am so scared!Please!The noise!The noise is scary!"

"Mommy?What is wrong with Wolfkit?"

"Reedkit go back to sleep.Wolfkit just had a bad dream that's all.Don't worry I have it under control."

"Okay.[What's wrong with Wolfkit?Ya.Ya.Ya.]"

"Mosskit,Runningkit,Featherkit,and Reedkit.Please go back to sleep."

"Please Mommy!We have to leave now!The noise is louder then before!Please!Please![Wailing]
Please just listen!The noise is so loud!I can barely hear!"

"Wolfkit!You are going to wake the whole camp!Now just go back to sl-[Just then a huge wolf crashes into the nursery,and grabs Rainwater]

"MOMMY![Then it grabs Reedkit,Mosskit,Runnngkit,and Featherkit]NOOOOOO!MOSSKIT!REEDKIT!RUNNINGKIT!FEATHERKIT!WHY!!!![Then the wolf thrusts its muzzle at Wolfkit.Wolfkit is cowering on the ground as the big wolf sniffs him,then leaves.Wolfkit's mother,and brothers and sisters have joined StarClan in a cruel way]PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME!!!!


Chapter One

Wolfsong!Wolfsong!Wolfsong!

Wolfsong has just received his warrior name.Right at that moment he hears the ringing he has heard countless times before.Each time he could do nothing but watch as another cat of his clan was killed.The same way his family was killed.The ringing was the sound of death.Wolfsong was a Death Listener.He could hear death before a cat died.The ringing is loudest when the wolf pack comes.That's when he can clearly hear the sound of death.Wolfsong now knows that no matter how hard he tried,he could not save any cats lives,if the ringing started.He runs out of camp,when his clan were still chanting his warrior name.He did not want to see another death of one of his beloved clanmates.He ran blindly through the forest.Not caring if he ran into other clans territory's.He just wanted to escape the sound of death.He ran for a long time.He stopped when the ringing stopped.But then he heard something else.It sounded like a huge animal crashing through the forest.He quickly turned around,ready to run.But when he turned,he regreted it.He came face to face with a huge silvery wolf.He wanted to run,but couldn't.Those black eyes held him in place.He did not want to look at this wolves face for the second time in his life.His muzzle had fresh blood on it,just like last time.

"We meet again,Death Listener..."


Chapter 2 Coming Soon!

Camila/Dawncloud said...

Hi Sorrelpaw,

Awesome story (the fanfic you posted on the link) and I love the award. You deserve it!!
Comment deleted??? It wasn't mine, but is everything ok? I will be attending the author chat next weekend with the Erins as Dawncloud. So please note that I will be changing my username to Dawncloud as well. So if you could post a question box on your site, that would be great. I will try to get them answered and I will have a lot of info provided by the Erins on next Monday or sooner.Do you have a wand and worlds account??

Summersky said...

That was soooooooo good! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Summersky said...

Rain Clan:
Home: Marsh banks
Food: Fish, frogs, birds
Leader: Jadestar-Jet black female, sleek fur, bright green eyes
Deputy: Windglider-Light brown tabby male, sleek fur, amber eyes
Warriors & Apprentices:
Brightskies-Pale orange tabby female, sleek fur, blue eyes
Darkwing-Dark gray tabby male, thick fur, smoky blue eyes
Apprentice: Moonpaw-White female, thick fur, yellow eyes
Shadowbreeze-Dark gray tabby male, thick fur, blue eyes
Nightfire-Black male, sleek fur, yellow~orange fur
Apprentice: Sunpaw-Pale yellow tabby, thick fur, yellow eyes
Flameriver: Dark red tabby, sleek fur, blue eyes
Leafmoon: Light brown tabby female, sleek fur, yellow eyes
Apprentice: Cloudpaw-White male, thick fur, blue eyes
Grassnight-Jet black female, sleek fur, dark green eyes
Queens & Kits:
Dawnflower: Jet black female, sleek fur, gray~green eyes
Kits:
Seakit-Black male, thick fur, green eyes
Wavekit-Black female, thick fur, smoky blue eyes
Ripplekit-Black female, thick fur, blue eyes
Breezeblossom-Light brown tabby female, sleek fur, blue eyes
Kits:
Rosekit-Red tabby female, sleek fur, blue eyes
Lilykit-Light brown female, sleek fur, blue eyes

Family Trees:
Jadestar, Grassnight, and Dawnflower are sisters, parents unknown.
Windglider, Breezeblossom, and Leafmoon are brother and sisters, parents unknown.
Brightskies’ kits are Moonpaw, Sunpaw, and Cloudpaw, father unknown.
Darkwing and Shadowbreeze are brothers, parents unknown.
Dawnflower and Darkwing are mates.
Flameriver and Breezeblossom are mates.

☪Dream said...

This is the next chapter to Death Listener.And if you want to see new chapters go to www.dreamstaroflakeclan.blogspot.com

Chapter 2-Finding

"Leave!"Wolfsong says finally breaking away from the big wolves stare.

"Why would we do that?This forest is very rich in prey."

"Why!Why are you killing my clan!"

"I am only feeding myself and my pack.Is that not what you do when you kill a mouse,who might or might not have a family of it's own?I am only trying to stay alive."

"Who are you?"

"Well Wolfsong I am Silver.The leader of Nightpack.This is Fang,Cloud,Claw,Storm,Light and Blackness.We have come to this forest when some of our pack members were killed by Death's.[Humans or Two-legs]I would go back to your home.Before I change my mind about never killing you.Leave!"Silver snarls fiercely.

Wolfsong starts running back to his clan.To see who Silver killed this time.When he came to the camp,he did not believe what he saw.Wingstar was on the ground.Obviously losing lives by the second.Wolfsong continued to look around.He saw Heathersky wailing her loss for her last kit alive,Sunkit.Sunkit was going to become an apprentice in half a moon.Then Wolfsong focused his gaze on Smokestorm.His body was crushed.Wolfsong walked up to Smokestorm,one of his closest friends.He saw blood behind Smokestorm.Wolfsong believed that Smokestorm was crushed trying to save Littlepaw.His son.Littlepaw was the only apprentice not there in the clearing alive.Wolfsong also noticed that Flowernight,Soottail and Rainash were not in the clearing.All prey for Nightpack.Then when Wolfsong looked over at Wingstar again,he saw Wingstar jerk once then lay still.He did not move again.Leafriver will be going to riceive his nine lives now.Nightpack went to far this time.Too many cats were dead.Then Wolfsong remembered that one of the pack members looked and smelled weird.Wolfsong was pretty sure it was Light.Then he smelled that same scent behind him.There was Rosepetal standind with her paw raised to attack.She had white foam coming out of her mouth.She also had a crazed look in her eye.She started to bring her paw down on Wolfsong.

"Rosepetal!ST-"

Chapter Three Coming Soon!

☪Dream said...

Here is the fourth chapter to Death Listener-

Chapter Three-Worry

Just before Rosepetal could strike Wolfsong,Riverclaw slammed into Rosepetal.Killing her instantly.

"I am sorry StarClan.I had what I had to do.To save a clanmate that would live."Riverclaw hangs his head in shame.

"Th-thank-you Riverclaw.You saved my life."

"No problem.What about Wingstar?We need to bury him.And Wolfsong.Where were you.No one saw you in the camp when the wolves came.Are you a traitor?"Riverclaw asked acussingly.

"I am not a traitor!I ran.I ran because I could not see another cat die.When i know that i can't do anything."Wolfsong whispers.

"Let's go bury Wingstar,and Smokestorm."

"What about Rosepetal?"

"No cat can touch her.We will get some sticks on the way.The river is just right here.We will wash her then bury her.But then cats can not drink out of the river for a few sun-rises."

Wolfsong goes and picks up Wingstar,while Riverclaw picks up Smokestorm.They carry them to the center of the camp,to be honoured.Leafriver gives Wingstar one last lick on the shoulder before he lieaves to receive his nine lives.

That night the clan sleeps beside Wingstar and Smokestorm.Some cats lie by Rosepetal.Moonlily warned them to not go to close to Rosepetal.

The next day the clan waits for Leafriver/star to come back.During the night Wolfsong heard faint ringing.He knows that the wolf pack was hunting.But farther away.The clan believes that Leafriver/star is probably just late.They wait all day long.Then the moon rises and the clan starts to worry.What will they do without a leader or deputy.Then they hear a yowl from Stonefang.He went to look for Leafriver/star.He comes running into camp out of breath.But manages to say four words that could change everything.

"Leaf...blood...hopeless...lives..."

Chapter Four Coming Soon!

☪Dream said...

Chapter Four-Power
Then Stonefang fainted.Moonlily rushed over and took him to her den.They waited two more days.Until they finally realized what Stonefang was trying to say.The clan thought that he meant that he found Leafriver's blood.Then that it is hopeless to try to fight.And last of all that "lives"means that the clan is all going to die.Moonlily was going to go to the Moon Pool to find out who the new leader would be.She would be escorted by Stonefang,who was better.

"Be careful Stonefang,and Moonlily.We can not afford to lose anymore cats."Heathersky said in complete worry.

"Don't worry Heathersky.As long as I am with Moonlily we will both be fine."Stonefang said while purring to his mate.

Wolfsong had a bad feeling.As he watched the clans last hope of survival leave the camp,maybe for the last time,he heard the dreaded ringing.Then before Wolfsong could do anything,Silver burst into the clearing with hos pack behind him.But something was different.Light was not with them.The clan started to yowl in fear,as Silver grabbed Dawnheart,threw her up in the air,and killed her.The clan could not take anymore of this.Nightpack was picking the cats of MoonClan off one by one.Then Wolfsong felt soft fur beside him.He looked over and was stunned.Standing there beside him,ready for battle,were his family.

"Reedkit!Mosskit!Featherkit!Runningkit!Rainwater!"

"Hello my son.You have grown up to be a fine warrior.And this is not Reedkit,Runningkit,Mosskit and Featherkit anymore.They are Reedpond,MosscloudFeatherwing and Runningbrook.Just as you became a warrior,they did too."Rainwater said with pride in her eyes.

"Hello brother."Reedpond said purring.

"He-Hello.How...what...why are you here?"Wolfsong said still stunned.

"We have come to tell you that your medicine cat and warrior will not make it to the Moon Pool,or back to the clan.You need to defend the clan.Use your power for good use.Do not waste it.You will save the clan.Goodbye.I am so proud of you Wolfsong."Rainwater said fading away with her kits.

"Wait!DON'T LEAVE ME AGAIN!!!"Wolfsong wailed.

Wolfsong hung his head.But when he looked up,he had power and determination in his eyes.He started to run,then he launched himself at Silver's blood covered muzzle.

"LEAVE OR DIE!

Chapter Five Coming Soon!

♣icefox♣ said...

Hi, it's Icefox here! I love your blog. I am a huge fan of WARRIORS, and I have so many theories and stuff about the family trees and characters and stuff. Overall, it rocks! Keep blogging!

♣icefox♣ said...

I have a theory about the forth apprentice. It might be Dovekit, because a dove is a bird, like Jaypaw. Or Jay's Wing, that ancient cat. It's a stretch, but who knows? Maybe the Erins will just select one of them at random.

Rosedapple said...

On the cover of fading echoes there is Jayfeather and Ivypaw i just found out!

☪Dream said...

Chapter Five-Risen
Wolfsong landed flat on Silver's face.Wolfsong started to claw at the wolves eyes.Then Silver howled in pain.He shook Wolfsong off and ran.With only one eye.The pack watched Silver run,howling in pain.They then ran too,knowing that if their leader was defeated,the whole pack was defeated.Wolfsong slowly got up and looked around.It seemed to be that all the clan that was left,were in the camp.Then Wolfsong heard the ringing.He looked at the huge hole in the wall of the camp.Then Fang flew in through the hole and grabbed Thrushpaw.

"This is what you get when you hurt our leader!"

There was a loud snap as Fang crushed Thrushpaw with his powerful jaws.Then he threw Thrushpaw up in the air,opened his mouth,and let Thrushpaw fall in to his open mouth.Then Fang swallowed.Thrushpaw was gone.Wolfsong had had enough of this.His eyes were full of anger and power.While Fang spit out the bones of poor Thushpaw,Wolfsong threw himself at Fangs throat.

"Now this is what you get for killing our clan!"

Wolfsong bit down hard on Fangs throat.Blood started to poor out fast.Fang collapsed and was still.Wolfsong let go of Fang's destroyed throat and turned around.The clan were cowering in fear.In fear of Wolfsong.They had never known a cat could kill a huge wolf.Swallowpond then looked at the sky.

"StarClan have spoken.The new leader has risen!"

The clan slowly started to calm down and started to chant Wolfsong's name.Quietly at first but then so loud that the whole forest could probably hear them.Wolfsong stood,in shock,staring around the devastated clearing.He did not even hear the clan chanting.The only sound that he could hear was his family.Chanting his name.He closed his eyes,but when he opened them,they were shining,with happiness and fear.

"Is it really me you want as your leader!"

Chapter Six Coming Soon!

yuiopo said...

To respond to what icefox said i think its dovekit because not only is dove a bird like a jay but its also an animal like lion

♣icefox♣ said...

http://www.katecary.co.uk/images/erinblog/WarriorsOmen2JKTdes1a.jpg
Responding to Rosedapple: here is the link to the cover of Fading Echoes.

☪Dream said...

Chaper Six-Revenge
"How dare that cat do this to me!I am half blind now!And he killed Fang!He will pay!I should have killed him many seasons ago![growls]Blackness.If anything happens to me you will be the new leader!Fang would have been a great leader,but no!That Death Listener had to get in the way!Blackness!"Silver looked at Blackness.

"Yes Silver.What would you like me to do."

"I want you to go to the camp tonight.If what Swallowpond said is true.Then Wolfsong will be going to the Moon Pool to get his nine lives.Attack the camp,and grab as many cats as you can.I want that clan gone!Bring the cats back.I want to kill them myself.I want to give them a slow painful death.But this time it will be different.Wolfsong will not be there.Bring Claw and Cloud.Storm would have gone too.But she is close to having pups.My pups.More wolves for the clan."Silver grins.

"Okay.Claw and Cloud.Let's go!"Blackness runs off with Claw and Cloud.

"Finally.I will get my revenge"

Chapter Seven Coming Soon!
(I know it is short,but it was Silver talking and stuff.So i thought that it could be shorter)

☪Dream said...

Chapter Seven-Ambush
"Swallowpond?Are you really sure that i am the new leader!How could I be a leader?I was made a warrior seven sunrises ago!I just don't get it..."

"Wolfsong.You killed a full grown wolf.To me.That is a sign.That if you are strong enough to kill a wolf.Then you are strong enough to lead a clan.You should be happy."

"But.How am I supposed to get to the Moon Pool,if the wolves would just kill me first?"

"Oh don't worry.I'll take care of that."

"But we can't risk any more warriors!We need more kits..."

"Just get going before it gets dark!"

"Fine.I'll get Riverclaw to come with me.

Wolfsong and Riverclaw set out to the Moon Pool.No wolves attacked.The forest was silent.But there was a faint ringing.The silence and the ringing worried Wolfsong greatly.What would the wolves do next?Riverclaw and Wolfsong reached the Moon Pool right as the moon was reaching it's full height.Right when Wolfsong touched his nose to the cool water,the ringing was painfully loud.But Wolfsong was already fading into StarClan at that time.

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"I don't smell the Death Listener Blackness.Silver was right"Cloud said.

"Of course he was right!Don't ever say that he wasn't right!"Blackness snarled.

"Sorry Blackness."Cloud cringed and fell to the ground in submissive behavior.

"Get up rabbit-dirt.We need to stay quiet.We will go when the moon rises."

The moon slowly rose.When the moon reached it's full height Blackness,Claw and Cloud burst their way into the camp.Blackness saw Heathersky running through the hole that the wolves created the other day.The wolves pursued her.

"Bad idea to run!"

Chapter Eight coming soon!
[was that the way you like my chapters?:D]

☪Dream said...

Chapter Eight-Lives
"Welcome Wolfsong."

"Thank-you.I am here to receive my nine lives.If i am truly who you wish to lead the clan."

"You are.Since you were born you were a leader.You grew up being a leader.Cats looked up to you because of your bravery and determination."

"I know."

"It is time to receive your first life."

"Wait.Who are you?"

"I am Moonstar the first leader of Moonclan."Leafriver stepped forward.

"Hello Wolfsong.You were lucky enough to reach the Moon Pool safely.Unlike me.With this life I give you courage.Use it well in defense of you clan."Leafiver stepped back.Wolfsong felt a sharp pain go through him then quickly pass.

"Thank-you Leafriver.You would have made a fine leader too."

Next came Stonefang.

"Hello.With this life i give you justice.Use it well to judge the actions of others."pain stabbed Wolfsong and memories flooded back from when his family was killed.

Next came Rainwater.

"Hello my son.With this life I give you loyalty to do what you know to be right."A painful memory of Rainwater refusing to leave when Wolfsong begged her to.

Next came Smokestorm.

"Hello Wolfsong.You were a great friend but you will be an even better leader.With this life I give you tireless energy.Use it well to carry out the duties of a leader."Wolfsong paws burned and his heart shook with pain.

Next came Sunkit.

"Hello.With this life I give you protection.Use it well to care for your clan as a mother cares for her kits."The pain and suffering of Heathersky trying to protect her kits sent a strong sharp pain through his body.

Next came Thrushpaw.

"Hello Wolfsong.With this life I give you mentoring.Use it well to train the young cats of your clan."Wolfsong felt his paws burn with this life.

Next came Reedpond.
"Hello brother.With this life I give you compassion.Use it well for the elders of your clan,and the sick,and all those weaker then yourself."Wolfsong felt a pang of worry for his clan as the pain shot through him.

The next cat to step forward was Dawnheart.

"Hello.With this life I give you love.Use it well for all the cats in your care."The pain that he expected was not there.But love and images of Riverclaw was.

The last cat to step forward was Wingstar.

"Welcome Wolfsong.With this life I give you nobility and cetainty and faith.Use it well as you lead your clan in the ways of StarClan and the warrior code."Searing pain shot through Wolfsong.This pain burned his heart and gave him the faith to lead his clan.

"I hail you by your new name,Wolfstar!Your old life is no more.You have now received the nine lives of a leader,and StarClan grants you guardianship of MoonClan!Defend it well;care for the young and old;honor your ancestors and the traditions of the warrior code;live each life with pride and dignity.Use each life to the fullest and use each life living for your clan."

"Wolfstar!Wolfstar!Wolfstar!"

"But when you go back to your clan,Wolfstar,one will not be there,and never again will be there.The times will be different,and your clan will live peacefully for many moons to come.Good-bye Wolfstar."

Wolfstar woke up beside the Moon Pool.He looked over and saw Riverclaw waiting for him.

"Hello Wolfstar.Let's go back to your clan now."


Chapter Nine Coming Soon!
[I know that chapter was just about his lives.But i promise you I will have the next chapter out in a few days!]

☪Dream said...

Chapter Nine-Ending
Heathersky ran for days and days.She ran past where the other wolves were.Silver,Storm,Shadow,Star,Night,Thunder,Lake and Moon.They followed.They were hungry and needed the food.Heathersky led them far from the territory.As far as she could run before she got tired.The three sunrises later.The wolves got her,and killed.But they did not know here they were.

"Um.Silver where are we?This doesn't look like that other forest...what are we going to do?"Storm whined anxiously.

"I don't know Storm.It's starting to rain.We will never find our way back now.I guess we will have to live in this forest."Silver said calmly

"But Silver!I don't smell any cats!"Storm howled

"Storm!What I say is what you follow!We are living here from now on!we will find prey to eat!Don't worry!"Snarled Silver

~~~~~~~~~~

Wolfstar and Riverclaw made there way back to MoonClan.

"Did StarClan accept you,Wolfstar?"Swallowpond asked curiously.

"Yes I have received my nine lives and my new name,Wolfstar.Is everyone here?StarClan said that one would not be here?And the ringing stopped?Did the wolves come again?"

"Yes Wolfstar and no.The wolves came like I thought.But the clan had left the camp and climbed trees.Except for Heathersky.She volunteered to be bait.Her mate and kist were dead.She could not live here anymore.She wanted to be with them."Swallowpond said nervously.

"What!Poor heathersky.That's why the ringing stoped.They must have got her.Let's hope the wolves are far,far away."Wolfsong hung his head and jumped onto the Star Rock.

"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here beneather the StarRock for a clan meeting!"cats started to pour out of the dens.

"I have just found out about Heathersky!She was a brave warrior and we will honour her tonight!Let's hope she has found peice in StarClan with her mate and kits!We will sit vigil for her tonight.

Also I have gone to the Moon Pool and received my nine lives!My name is now Wolfstar.I need to appoint a new deputy!

I say this in the eyes of StarClan and Leafriver,and Wingstar,so that they may see and approve my choice!

Sparrowbranch you have proved yourself worthy and capable of taking on the role of deputy.You shall be the new deputy of MoonClan!

In other news.Riverclaw is my mate and she is expecting my kits!

Sparrowbranch.I want some patrols to go out and make sure the wolves are really gone!That is all!"Wolfstar leaped down from the StarRock and sprinted over to Riverclaw.

"Wolfstar.Our kits are going to be beautiful.And i hope they are as brave as you."Riverclaw said with pride.

"I do too Riverclaw."Wolfstar answered.

~~~~~~~~~~~

☪Dream said...

Here is the second half of the ninth chapter-

Earlier.

Swallowpond.What are we going to do about the wolves.They must have heard you say the Wolfsong will be the new leader.They will attack tonight."Heathersky said in concern.

"You're right Heathersky.We will climb inot the trees tonight."Swallowpond said calmly.

"But the wolves will still be here!I will lead them out of the territory.My mate and kits are dead.I want to be with them.I miss them so much."Heathersky said sadly.

"Never!Heathersky,you are needed in this clan."Swallowpond said.

"But i don't want to be here!I want to be with them."Heathersky said pleading.

"Okay.Tonight when they come you will appear and run.Run as far and as fast as you can.You are our only hope to save the clan"Swallowpond said giving up.

"Thank-you Swallowpond.Thank-you so much"Heathersky said.

"Do not thank me.It is your destiny."Swallowpond said.

~~~~~~~~~~

Five moons later.

"Riverclaw.They will make fine warriors once they are apprentices."Wolfstar said.

"I know.Moonkit,Sunkit,Wingkit,Silverkit and Pinekit come here for some fresh-kill.And I want you to take a nap.Okay?"Riverclaw said.

"Sure Mother!"Silverkit and the others choursed.

"Silverkit looks exactly like you.And he has the same personality as you.He will be a great warrior someday."Riverclaw told Wolfstar.

"I know.Let's just hope he's not a Death Listener,like me,too."Wolfstar said while laughing.

"I love you Wolfstar.I am so glad there are no threats anymore."Riverclaw said while looking at Wolfstar.

"Ya.For now though.A threat we have never faced is coming.And fast."

The End!
Dark Sight Coming Soon!

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

yeaaaaaaaaaaaaa! happy ending!

Anonymous said...

wow great story I LUVS IT

Dark said...

The Lost Clans

LeafClan

Leader:Rainingleaf- powerfully built gray tom with white streaks

Deputy:Lightningstreak- light ginger tom with amber eyes and a patch of black on side that looks somewhat like a lightning bolt

Warriors:
Acornpatch- golden tom with brown patches and white-tipped tail
Apprentice, Shiningpaw
Crystalheart- silver she-cat with white legs and green eyes
Apprentice, Gingerpaw
Pollenpelt- golden she-cat with amber eyes and black ears
Apprentice, Lemonpaw
Hailingfall- white tom with gray legs and tail with blue eyes
Speckleleaf- tortoushell she-cat with amber eyes
Dustyfern- light brown tabby tom with green eyes
Brookcloud- gray tom with white paws and blue eyes
Lightfur- bright ginger she-cat with green eyes

Apprentices:
Amberpaw- unusually dark ginger she-cat with amber eyes
Shiningpaw- silvery-gray she-cat with blue eyes (daughter of Crystalheart)
Gingerpaw- ginger tom with white ears and green eyes
Lemonpaw- light golden she-cat with brown patches and amber eyes (daughter of Acornpatch)

Queens:
Silvertail- light gray she-cat (mother of Snowkit and Ashkit)
Cherrycloud- tortoushell she-cat with blue eyes (expecting kits)

Elders:
Dawnfeather- pale gray tabby she-cat
Wingthistle- brown tom with gray legs

Foreteller:(like a medicine cat)
Owlmoon- tabby gray tom with green eyes

Look out for Chapter 1

(sorry I couldn't fit it in)